r/Avatar_Kyoshi 28d ago

Discussion Kyoshi's Last 2 Years

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u/NotAsUsual 27d ago

Honestly, i enjoyed the first draft a bit more. It had its flaws but it was better structured and felt more grounded. Why did you delete it?

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u/Zealousideal-Work719 27d ago

Awhn man, sorry to hear that. I just thought a few tweaks might've made it better.