r/CharacterRant • u/Shoddy_Fee_550 • 15h ago
[LES] A character can only be as intelligent as the person writing them. In this case Riri Williams in the Ironheart series.
Let's be honest, there are plenty of things the Ironheart series can be criticized for. But in this low effort post, I just want to talk a little about how ridiculous and contrived Riri's problems are in the show.
So, Riri has two core motivations that drive her decisions and actions throughout the series. First, she turns to crime because she needs money to finish her knock-off Iron Man suit, wanting to become “iconic” and also rich with it. Second, and more importantly, her real reason for creating the armor is to protect herself and her mother because of earlier trauma caused by a drive-by shooting that killed her father and best friend.
My issue is that she’s essentially already succeeded in these two goals, or is at least capable of achieving them without the suit, which makes her later decisions feel dumb or unnecessary.
Riri already created a watch that literally generates a protective shield around the wearer and even automatically stops bullets. And what does she do with it? She sells it to another MIT student, which leads to her getting kicked out for plagiarism.
That invention would’ve changed the world more and made it a way better place than any knock-off Iron Man armor ever could. And of course, it would’ve made her a zillionaire.
Just think about it: no more shooting victims, no more street muggings, and countless fatal accidents could be avoided with that kind of technology. It could save countless lives by drastically reducing violent crime or fixing safety issues. People would be living in the safest era in human history, all thanks to one invention that was tossed aside in favor of replicating a suit of armor someone else had already invented.
A good writer would immediately realize just how a powerful and significant mcguffin they put in Riri's hands. What basically solves all of her problems from the start. So they would make up some excuse or limitation to explain why it can’t do that. For example, the watch could be faulty and shut down after a few minutes. Or maybe it requires a rare material, such as vibranium jewelry gifted to her by the Wakandans. Or anything else, really.
But no, without any problem, she can just create multiple watches at home using limited resources for her mom and one other friend. What’s stopping her from creating more? What’s stopping her from selling the technology and getting filthy rich from the revenue?
And this is entirely on the writers. They introduced the watch, for some reason, but made it overly useful, simple to use, and way too easy to reproduce. That alone could have solved all of Riri's problems from the very beginning. But instead, the story has her fixated on building the armor because they have to, since the show is called Ironheart. So when Riri makes so many mistakes and bad decisions because of her Iron Man knock-off, she ends up looking like an idiot blinded by her own arrogance, completely ignoring the better solution she already had.