Kill Your Darlings? Thoughts?

[u/MrBwriteSide70]

Just finished reading this and Im curious everyone’s thoughts. Not gonna post spoilers but my main frustration was the final chapter felt like a rush to the end. There was so much build up and then MILLION MILES PER HOUR. I appreciated the original story mixing fantasy with horror (even if some was more graphic than I personally prefer.) What does everyone else think?

[u/JooksKIDD]

it started good but ended kinda mid. i can’t lie

[u/MrSarcastica → u/JooksKIDD]

Its was so weirdly paced. It seemed like it was building to something in the first few issues. Then it just kind of revealed everything in one issue. It needed a longer run fo ir to have worked properly