What do you think of a scene from my game?

[u/PlaySteakOutGame]

[u/Raokairo]

The lighting is weird and the bloom is really high but otherwise it looks great.

[u/PlaySteakOutGame → u/Raokairo]

thank youu i'll fix lighting and bloom

[u/susnaususplayer]

Camera should slightly move ALWAYS to make scenes feel more alive

[u/darx0n → u/susnaususplayer]

Agreed. Going from full stop to motion and then full stop again seems unnatural. Either it's moving for the entire scene or is standing still. Not both.

Other than that it's great.

[u/PlaySteakOutGame → u/darx0n]

thank youuu

[u/PlaySteakOutGame → u/susnaususplayer]

you are right i'll fix

[u/Mission_Engineer_999]

I like it.

[u/PlaySteakOutGame → u/Mission_Engineer_999]

thankksss

[u/RedBambooLeaf]

• I would suggest you to add some movement other than the train, the environment feels stiff, rigid
• the short wait at the beginning makes things feel a little staged: I'd try to make it start with the train already in view or make the wait longer and meaningful
• I don't see anything interesting: it rather looks like an exercise to me atm
• the overall mood feels nice
• I like the warm light colors

[u/PlaySteakOutGame → u/RedBambooLeaf]

thank you i'll add some things and what you said makes a lot of sense, I will definitely keep that in mind.

[u/mohsenkhajavinik]

I noticed the wind sound maybe you could make the lights and shop sign move a little. It's a coal train so it must have more smoke. Very more. Don't forget the sound of it either.

[u/PlaySteakOutGame → u/mohsenkhajavinik]

hii thank youu I will do what you say

[u/Dlaha]

What genre is it? Looking nice.

[u/PlaySteakOutGame → u/Dlaha]

Western Theme thank youu

[u/PatrikM_Games]

It has its own vibe. To me, it feels like an old-style cool movie studio ident. :D I like it though!

[u/PlaySteakOutGame → u/PatrikM_Games]

thank you so much i'm happy to hear that

[u/ymukha]

I like :)

[u/PlaySteakOutGame → u/ymukha]

thankss!!

[u/notyme_]

the sudden shift from stationary to constant speed panning of the camera is jarring, consider starting the scene in movement or split it up into two different shots from different angles.

[u/PlaySteakOutGame → u/notyme_]

okeyy thank you i'll try

[u/Odd-Nefariousness-85]

It's very nice! But I'm not really sure about the frozen vignette effect, perhaps the covered area should be reduced.

[u/PlaySteakOutGame → u/Odd-Nefariousness-85]

Thank you, unfortunately the effect looks a little broken, I will fix it

[u/Lonely_Parsnip]

Graphics are great. I hope it is survlval, building and crafting game with wild west themed. 

[u/PlaySteakOutGame → u/Lonely_Parsnip]

yess kinda thank you

[u/BitcrushedMozart]

"The enemy is being reinforced with an armored train". 

[u/PlaySteakOutGame → u/BitcrushedMozart]

they are coming

[u/TheBeardedParrott]

Gives me Resident Evil vibes.

[u/modregod]

It's amazing

[u/pyromidscheme]

Looks great, thanks for sharing. Agree with others on the need for a little more camera movement toward the end

[u/Brandibober]

I don’t think horse stay like that if train arrives. Add some moution to landscape.

[u/Technos_Eng]

The camera movement is okay, but some ease in-out would make it nicer, also changing the path slightly to avoid clipping through the light pole, and most importantly, the sound levels of the wind and train must be adjusted. As the camera moves away from the train, it’s loosing the sound for a half second even if it is in plain sight. You should adjust the damping distance to keep within the reach distance and reduce the sound level of the wind after the intro. Do you show us your updated version please ?

[u/Technos_Eng → u/Technos_Eng]

To be a bit more positive, the graphics and light work is great ! 😉

[u/Aeropar]

I hope this is another frostpunk

[u/Independent_Job_5592]

RDR2 vibe! Great job!

[u/AlexSmithsonian]

I think you've been playing too much Red Dead Redemption... or not enough? One of those.

[u/SilliestBear]

not a fan of the snow overlay aside from that looks good