Looking for feedback on my project: The Reef Stories

[u/razzarindo]

I recently started working on an old plan of mine: The Reef Stories.
It’s a mix between a fictional interview collection/gonzo-style journal. I’m mainly writing it in Hungarian, but I’m posting it in English on Facebook and Donably.

I’m definitely not here asking for donations (though of course I’d appreciate it if you enjoy what I write 😉) — I’m here for feedback.

I’m still working on the synopsis — it’s clear in my head, but for now I’d like the story to unfold through the interviews themselves.

Thanks in advance for any feedback!

https://www.facebook.com/the.reef.stories
https://www.donably.com/thereefstories

[u/razzarindo]

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