r/firelookouts • u/Apart-One4133 • 12d ago
Just started painting and..
I just started painting this season, This is my 3rd canvas after having sketched it a couple times. My wife say it's beautiful but I need some honest opinions here 😅.
Is this worth leaving at the site for the next one (although most likely that would be me, but who knows) or should I just being it back home instead ?
So.. Would YOU, as a Lookout, be happy to find this or would it go directly to the garbage on your first service ?
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u/Sensitive_Implement 12d ago
There's no way to know what the next person will think. Will it make somebody happy? It certainly might.
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u/pitamakan 12d ago
Of course there's no way of knowing ... but if I was that next lookout, it would make me happy.
I guess the real question is, do you have a place for it at home?
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u/Apart-One4133 11d ago
 Glad to know you would enjoy it. I do have room at home for it. Do I have room for it in the car tho, that I don't know haha
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u/redEPICSTAXISdit 10d ago
I wouldn't throw it away. I'd definitely leave it alone and let others enjoy it as well. Only thing I would work on is the angle of the underside in the bottom right. If the building is a true octagon and all the sides are equal then the right would look closer to the same angle as the left. Obviously the angle would be oblong due to perspective and could be slightly kiltered of viewing off center but as is that angle is the only thing throwing off the reality imo. Everything else is great, especially for only your 3rd time painting.
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u/Apart-One4133 10d ago
You're right, and I can't unsee it now 😫. But anyway I decided to add a bit more details to it. Such as adding the ladder (which would be on the right side) so Ill be able to repair the part you mentioned and add stuff on top of it to make it look less obvious as well.Â
Thanks !Â
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u/MorningIndependent87 12d ago
Personally, I think anyone willing to throw away art of the lookout they are working, made by someone who worked there previously, is a bit of a dick. If they don’t like it, they can just tuck it behind something.
From what I can see, your canvas looks a little big, so I’m not too sure they would be inclined to keep it propped up somewhere, unless there’s already a good spot for it (like on the firefinder podium or whatever). Whenever I do a painting for a lookout, I usually do it as a postcard size or smaller. That way it can easily be tucked in a drawer (plus it makes getting the really fine details less of a concern).