r/jungle A Bizarre Ride To The Darkside 4d ago

Feedback Friday Feedback Friday Thread

Post your tunes for feedback here. This post will happen every Friday, from now on all tunes that people have made themselves and want feedback on need to posted here.

Everyone please give as much feedback as you can, thank you.

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u/Stunning_Lack275 Wheel Up Merchant 4d ago

My current WIP really pleased with it, feel i need to vary my drum patterns a little more n work on the mixdown. Would love to know anyone’s thoughts.

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u/SpeedboatBullseye 4d ago

I'm enjoying it. Breaks are really good. I don't think you need the drop at 2:00. It kinda kills the momentum (and again at 2:27). Second breaks coming in here are decent, but I think just keep it rolling. Loving the section at 3:32 with the pitched snares coming in.
It's a really good vibe. Think you focus should be on structure.

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u/Stunning_Lack275 Wheel Up Merchant 4d ago

Thanks, I defo hear what you’re saying. Will have a shuffle around.

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u/Mrmaw A Bizarre Ride To The Darkside 4d ago

Only listened on my phone so can’t say too much about the mix but I’m liking this

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u/ghal3on Octamed Warrior 4d ago

nice vibe! first impression was too much reverb

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u/Stunning_Lack275 Wheel Up Merchant 4d ago

Thanks! I’m with you, defo washes it out a bit

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u/Next_Abbreviations57 3d ago

Yeah, I really like it. The intro is really creative. I dig that. The mix down definitely needs work, but I think that arrangement and everything else is pretty nice.

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u/Stunning_Lack275 Wheel Up Merchant 3d ago

Nice one thanks! Agree on the mixing, feels like the biggest mountain to climb in terms of learning to produce well.

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u/Next_Abbreviations57 3d ago

check out Stranjah on youtube if you have not already

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u/SpeedboatBullseye 4d ago

Just finished these two day.

Think this is best suited to r/jungle. Happy to be proved wrong.

This also fits, but is maybe a little less danceable?

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u/Stunning_Lack275 Wheel Up Merchant 4d ago

These are both great. Defo jungle

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u/Next_Abbreviations57 3d ago

i really like the first one

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u/SpeedboatBullseye 3d ago

Thanks 🙏

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u/SpeedboatBullseye 3d ago

Thanks! The second definitely has that jingle sound but with the arrangement I was going for Remarc, but think I ended up closer to Venetian Snares 😂

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u/spookyspektre10M Hardcore Junglist 4d ago

Still need to finish up the ending, but here's a No U-Turn style Techstep track I've been working on here & there over the past year or so: https://on.soundcloud.com/wcTGzNuxwkDJ0C87UN

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u/Next_Abbreviations57 3d ago

I don’t like the vocal bit, but the rest of it is fire

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u/ghal3on Octamed Warrior 3d ago

sounds bang on! cool track

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u/Next_Abbreviations57 3d ago

love this! gonna go through everyone’s posts now :)

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u/gregd303 3d ago

Great! It might motivate me to get back into making some tunes

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u/aquariumspalace 4d ago

I just uploaded a new EP here I hope y’all can give it a listen and tell me what you think!

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u/Next_Abbreviations57 3d ago

here’s one i’m trying to finish this weekend… mix down needs improvement and i need to finish the arrangement but the drop is pretty heavy i think :)

Kosheen - Hide U (DJ Anguish bootleg) ***** work in progress ***** https://on.soundcloud.com/SKZZLsc1MN5GZhIjAh

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u/Speak86 3d ago

Listen to Survival by TROSITY on #SoundCloud https://on.soundcloud.com/VnLCkkwVEECWq2IoH7

Not sure if its proper jungle, but it's about the jungle!!

I've played in bands for years so am confident with song arrangements etc, but the mixing side is quite new for me, so this isn't totally finished in that regard.

Im watching lots of youtube tutorials at the mo and getting my head around frequencies etc. Please let me know if you think there's any way I could improve the sound, it does sound overloaded in places I think. Cheers!

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u/kingpapajim 3d ago

1st time I’ve ever exported a project lol 4 months in to producing on fl. any feedback / suggestions would be super appreciated. https://on.soundcloud.com/oXsLACZjgIj2J8onei ❤️❤️