r/whowouldwin Jul 19 '25

Event Character Scramble Season 20 Round 0: Eden Prime

To determine Roster Seeding, Round 0 writeups will be ranked from 1-5 by our esteemed panel of judges. Seeding scores will be determined by the judges’ averaged ranks of your stories, with higher ranks receiving higher seeds. All three judges will read all Round 0s.

Your Judges are: /u/TheAsianIsGamin, /u/Proletlariet, and /u/Talvasha

When judge voting goes up for this round, we'll have a WWW moderator lock the thread, preventing anyone from posting more. Make sure to get all of your writing done on time!


The Character Scramble is a long-running writing prompt tournament in which participants submit characters from fiction to a specified tier and guideline. After the submission period ends, the submitted characters are "scrambled" and randomly distributed to each writer, forming their team for the season. Writers will then be entered into a single-elimination bracket, where they write a story that features their team fighting against their opponent's team. Victors are decided based on reader votes; in other words, if you want people to vote for you, write some good content. The winner by votes of each match-up moves on to the next round. The pattern continues until only one participant remains: the new Character Scramble champion, who gets to choose the theme, tier, and rules of the next Scramble!

The theme of Character Scramble 20 is Scramble Effect. Round prompts will be based on the many worlds, missions, and memorable moments found throughout the Mass Effect series.


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Round 0: Eden Prime

Lightyears away from where any of its ancestors once roamed, a rooster crows. The sun turns the purple of dawn into a bright, beautiful azure, and from within the arcologies that dot the land, efficient with both energy and space, the people rise just as slowly. There’s much work to be done, out there on the fields, but mornings like this are worth enjoying. The skies are clear, the land is fertile, and all is quiet. It’s hardly the most exciting corner of the galaxy—and that’s just the way it’s supposed to be.

Until an unexpected discovery turns this once-sleepy idyll into a flashpoint. At first, your team thinks this is a simple mission: Recover whatever it is they found, and slip out to get it where it needs to be before anyone can make a fuss.

But the moment your team makes it onto the planet, a firefight breaks out with an unforeseen enemy. Soon, it becomes clear: Something important has been unearthed, and someone wants it. Badly enough to kill for it.


Round Rules:.

  • Galaxy Map: Hundreds of billions of stars, each with its own system of planets. Your round doesn’t have to take place on an agrarian colony—or even on a sci-fi planet at all. But a season like this is about discovery as much as anything else. Start to show your audience where you’ve brought us.

  • Find the Beacon: Whether by being ordered to investigate it, or by chance, your team stumbles upon an object revealing something rather sinister. This object can be an artifact showing you visions, a murder weapon, written logs, a witness, or anything your story needs. But it has to be threatening—something your team never would have expected.

  • Don’t Worry. I’ve Got it Under Control: A contact or ally that your team expects to help instead betrays you. This contact must come from one of the Class Role Adoption Pools other than the one you adopt from.

  • The Price of Revenge: The traitor acts swiftly to take or destroy the object—without care for any bystanders or collateral damage. They set bombs, or a computer virus, or something else that would have disastrous effects for everybody around you. You must choose one of the following prompts:

    • Paragon: There are lives at stake, right here, right now—and besides, you’ve already seen the evidence yourself. The powers that be will just have to believe you. Let the traitor escape, lose the object, and save lives.
    • Renegade: Your newfound mission is too important. Hunt the traitor down, defeat them, and take the object back.
  • We Could Use Your Help: Your team comes with two characters, but you must select your third from the unscrambled characters of the Class you do not currently have, listed in tables below the roster here.

Please include in a comment, either before or after your writeup, which character you are adopting, with a link to their signup post.


Normal Rules:

  • Stand Fast, Stand Strong, Stand Together: Nobody can take on a mission like this alone. You’ve got a team of the brightest, toughest, and deadliest allies a Scrambler can find—use them. We’d love to see your characters make full use of their wide-ranging abilities, both on their own and as a team.

  • We Will Hold The Line: You know what’s at stake. Failure is not an option. Even if your characters have only a small chance of victory, write that small chance happening!

  • Special Tactics and Reconnaissance: Saving the galaxy will take more than the same old tricks. You are allowed and encouraged to mix and match powers, and to develop your characters in any way you wish, both on the battlefield and off. However, your opponents are not expected to keep track of these in-story changes, and vice-versa.

  • Every Life Is a Special Story of Its Own: Feel free to give a brief summary to introduce your characters at the start of your post. If you do, you should mention things like powers, personality, history, and anything else that the average reader should know before reading.

  • Legendary Edition: Sometimes, Spectres have to go a little outside the lines in service of their mission. You’ll have the same latitude—as long as you go with the broad strokes of the prompts and the rules, you'll be fine.


Round 0 will run from Saturday, July 19th to Saturday, August 9th, 11:59pm US Eastern Time.

The character limit for this round is 4 full length Reddit comments, or 40k characters.

While it is fine to go a little bit over, anything that far surpasses this limit will be disqualified. This limit does not include intro posts, or analysis of the matchup.

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u/MC_Minnow Aug 07 '25 edited Aug 08 '25

Titans Tower, Jump City

High above the city, Titans Tower stood watch over the bay. Its stylized shape gleamed brightly against the midday sun, painting the image of a devoted sentinel guarding its kingdom.

Unknown to most, its interior was experiencing rare silence today, absent of the laughter and shouting that normally filled its halls. There were no alarms to respond to, no missions to discuss, not even a lunchtime conversation. It was as if the whole tower was in a lull.

Only one room felt natural in this dull ambiance, devoid of liveliness by choice rather than consequence.

Raven’s room was still, dimly lit, and completely withdrawn from the outside world—just the way she preferred it. Thick black curtains covered the far wall, forbidding even the faintest sunlight from entering. In front of them stood an ornate mirror, draped behind heavy cloth.

Ancient tomes lined the bookshelves on either side of her—bindings worn, pages edged with dark enchantments. Each one pulsed with arcane power, their secrets scratching just beneath the surface.

Raven sat cross-legged in the center of the room, hovering a few inches off the floor. Her eyes were closed, arms relaxed at her sides, wrists resting against her knees. Five softly glowing candles floated around her, each flame a different hue. Her breaths came slow and measured, moving in rhythm with the soft chant that filled the room.

Azarath… Metrion… Zinthos.

The mantra resonated in her mind and throughout her body, releasing an aura of ultrablack all around her. Steadily, the emanation stretched toward every corner of the room, energy flowing in cadence until it filled the room completely.

Raven’s will extended with it, spreading her domain to every object she touched—every fabric, every candle, every surface became an extension of herself, its essence laid bare. Even the ancient texts revealed their secrets to her—sorcery, alchemy, and all the forgotten arts yielding quietly to her authority.

Once, this level of control required intense effort from Raven, but years of practice had made it only a mild task—she performed the same exercise daily as a part of her routine. She could extend her reach even farther if she wanted—pervade the entire tower with her will. She’d pushed herself harder in battle plenty of times.

But Raven valued control above everything, and she knew the farther she extended herself, the more she risked losing control. If that happened, her powers could become unruly or—even worse—corrupted. She couldn’t let that happen.

It would also be incredibly rude of her to go any farther, considering the other Titans lived right next door to her. Among other things, Raven was a stern advocate for the importance of privacy.

Not that any of the other Titans would’ve known the difference. They were all out on missions, spread across the globe and beyond: Starfire was handling diplomatic relations off-world; Robin and Cyborg were investigating a tech breach at Holt Industries; and Beast Boy had volunteered for an “eco-defense operation” in the Amazon—Raven was pretty sure he’d made the whole thing up to get out of doing chores, but she didn’t care enough to prove it. That left her to manage local affairs—the de facto point of contact, should anyone call.

She didn’t mind. Raven had grown to value her friends dearly over the years, but this level of solitude was a rare opportunity for her. It gave her all the time she needed to focus on achieving absolute mastery—not just over her powers, but her very psyche—and she intended to spend that time wisely.

Azarath… Metrion… Zinthos.

This was the secret to her balance, to her control. Friend and foe alike had heard Raven chant this spell a thousand times over the years, but very few recognized it as more than a simple incantation.

In fact, this wasn’t just some mystic expression to her, but a barrier—a ritual act of reinforcement. Each word held profound significance, working together to purify the demonic power coursing through her veins and turn it into something governable. They safeguarded her—contained her.

Azarath, the realm where Raven was born. Named after the monk Azar, whose magic had once held off Trigon single-handedly. Even after its destruction, the memory of her home was the foundation of Raven’s faith—the church that raised her, knowing she was the daughter of Trigon and what her destiny foretold, and having faith that she could overcome it.

Metrion, an Azarathian term signifying any divine domain or sphere of influence. In practice, it could refer to anything an individual held sacred. For Raven, her most sacred domain was herself—her life was hers to govern, defiant of any demonic influence or prophecy.

Zinthos, the unseen conduit that focused her will into physical force. Even Raven didn’t know what the word meant—it had surfaced early on in her training, granting her the catalyst she needed to wield her powers. The mystery behind its origin still bothered her, but she could at least tell that it held no trace of Trigon’s influence. That was enough to satisfy her.

Together, these words gave Raven control—not only over her surroundings, but over herself. As a mantra they created a balance inside her she’d never felt before, allowing her to suppress her inner darkness. She could act as the beacon of light she aspired to be—not the harbinger of death her bloodline demanded.

Through control, she gained freedom.

Azarath… Metrion… Zinth-

Her communicator chimed.

Raven gasped.

All at once the candles surrounding her were snuffed out. Books flew from their shelves, their magic convulsing amidst the fresh chaos. Curtains tore from the wall, sunlight flooding in. Raven winced, shielding her eyes as her aura smoldered around her.

Anger erupted like hellfire in her chest, carrying fear with it.

She slipped. She’d let herself become so comfortable with the others being gone that it made her complacent, which made her vulnerable. And all it took was one second of weakness for her to lose control.

She loathed herself for it.

The communicator chimed again—this time with a woman’s voice.

“Titans Tower, do you copy? I am in need of an available responder.”

Waving the curtains back into place with one hand, Raven fumbled for her device with the other, pressing down on the receiver.

“This is Raven, go ahead.”

Her voice wavered on her name, and she winced. Apparently the caller heard it too.

“Raven? You sound distressed. If your condition is critical, I can redirect my response to you immediately.”

Raven sighed, then focused on her breathing—steeling her emotions.

She tapped the receiver again.

“Everything’s fine here. I’m available. Who is this, and what’s the situation?”

There was a brief silence, then the caller continued.

“This is Kara Zor-El—Supergirl. I’m a colleague of Superman.”

Raven exhaled, her anger giving way—momentarily—to mild annoyance.

“I know who you are, Supergirl. We’ve worked together before. What do you need?”

“Raven, I require support tracking a meteor inbound for Earth. It is believed to contain alien life that may require our aid. Can you respond?”

“Yes. Do you know where it’s heading?”

“The projected crash site is twenty miles south of Smallville, coordinates 37.864–“

Raven exhaled harder, pinching at the bridge of her nose.

“Got it. I’ll look for the fiery rock in the sky.”

A brief pause. Then—

“Copy.”

Raven slipped her communicator inside her cloak. With a short wave she sent her scattered books back to their shelves, then stepped out into the main hallway.

Her pulse still raced. Doubt gnawed at her thoughts. Anger tried to follow.

She sealed them off for now.

There wasn’t time for weakness. Not when people were counting on her.


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u/MC_Minnow Aug 07 '25 edited Aug 08 '25

Outside Smallville, Kansas

Ten minutes and one portal jump later, Raven streaked eastward over open farmland. The Kansas sun beat down on her with judgment, far too bright for her liking, while golden fields blurred beneath her in endless rows.

She flew in silence, grateful once again to be alone—she didn’t want anyone to see her anger.

You slipped.

The truth echoed louder than any mantra inside her.

There was no denying it. She’d failed—herself, her team—all in one second.

What was the point of all this discipline, all the hours of isolation, if one moment could shatter her focus so easily? She’d trained her whole life to have control—to keep her mind still, her emotions tamed and resolute. Every ounce of willpower went into self-restraint. And still—still—she lost her grip the moment something unexpected happened.

All that control, and she was still just one blown fuse away from catastrophe—

Or destruction.

Her hands clenched without meaning to. Her aura flared—then steadied.

There was no comfort in telling herself she was better than before. That she was “getting stronger.” What did strength matter, when it was a double-edged sword? The cost of failure was always the same, and her father would use that same power against her, against everyone.

Worse still was knowing this was her only recourse: the futile struggle for containment. Constant monitoring. Endless caution. Unshakable fear.

It wasn’t progress. It wasn’t freedom. It was just the lesser evil.

The bitterness left a cold knot inside her.

A flash of red and blue interrupted her thoughts—Supergirl hovered a few hundred feet ahead, her uniform’s sharp outline distinct against the horizon. Her expression was calm, but unmistakably alert.

She raised a hand—more salute than wave—as Raven approached.

Raven exhaled sharply, forcing her thoughts down. No use unraveling now. She had a job to do.

“Thank you for coming so swiftly,” Kara said. Her voice was formal, but polite. If she’d seen Raven’s outburst just now, she chose not to comment.

“No problem,” Raven replied. “I’m a little surprised you called me. Where’s Superman?”

“Kal-El is responding to a situation in Metropolis. He has asked me to triage all non-critical emergencies in his absence.” Raven caught a hint of pride in the Kryptonian’s voice. “Of his available colleagues, I believe you are the most capable of providing sufficient aid for this mission.”

Raven crossed her arms, careful not to look too surprised. Being called a colleague of Superman was an honor in itself—she was shocked he even knew her name. But being picked over heroes like Wonder Woman? That stirred something in her, almost like…comfort.

“Happy I made the cut,” she replied coolly, keeping her voice neutral.

They hovered there a moment in silence, two radically different silhouettes against the sky.

Raven’s gaze shifted toward the horizon.

“So where’s the meteor?”

Kara nodded north. “Approximately twelve minutes out. I tracked its trajectory from low orbit—whatever it is, it’s unnatural. It changed direction three times coming in.”

“Any idea what kind of life is on it?”

Kara shook her head.

“All my sources know is that the life signature is faint. Whatever it is, it may require immediate medical attention.”

Raven frowned. Her eyes shifted toward the sky.

“Let’s make sure we’re there to help.”

With that, the two heroines took off down the valley.

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u/MC_Minnow Aug 07 '25 edited Aug 08 '25

The wind whipped at Raven’s face as she followed Supergirl over the Kansas plains, approaching a patch of open farmland. The sky stretched wide and cloudless above them, broken only by a few stray birds.

Kara moved with a soldier’s discipline—fast, calm, focused. Raven had to apply more power just to keep up, but she didn’t complain. Despite the Kryptonian’s clinical demeanor, there was something to appreciate in her conduct. No flair, no theatrics. Just motion. It was like flying with Starfire, only quieter.

Much, much quieter.

Raven respected it. Few people could share silence without trying to fill it. Kara’s presence helped center her thoughts, but there was nothing that needed to be said between them. The two simply flew, focused on their mission.

They crested a low ridge where crops gave way to untamed land. The area was remote—no people, no animals. Just tall grass and a half-collapsed barn down the slope. The perfect space for a crash site.

“This is the site,” Kara said, scanning the sky as she touched down. Raven landed beside her. “Estimated impact radius is one hundred meters. No civilians nearby.” She turned. “We’ll need to soften the landing; a full-force crash could kill whatever’s inside.”

Raven nodded. “I can slow it.”

Kara crouched, pressing a hand to the dirt. “After it lands, we’ll attempt to make contact. If it’s communicative, we learn what it is. If it’s injured, we provide aid. If it attacks or tries to escape—”

“We contain it,” Raven finished.

Kara stood again, and the two looked skyward.

Raven felt it now, far above them—a distant pressure, like a stormfront made of static. It wasn’t hostile…but it wasn’t passive, either.

A sound like tearing canvas split the air, then the object streaked through the atmosphere in a blazing fire. Its descent curved unnaturally—not falling, but aiming. Kara was right—this was no ordinary rock.

“Now,” Kara directed.

Raven stepped forward, arms raised. A dark shimmer pulsed from her hands.

“Azarath…”

Her voice was clear and commanding—not the low chant from in her room. The mantra echoed across the plain, rustling the grass with invisible force.

“Metrion…”

The magic surged inside her, waiting to be released. She seized it with her will, forcing it into alignment.

“…Zinthos!”

The fuse was lit, the floodgate opened. Raven’s eyes glowed white as power flowed from her fingertips and into the sky, exploding outward to become a dome of ultrablack above her. It expanded out in every direction, encompassing the field in a stadium-sized barrier of transparent energy.

The meteor crashed into it like a warhead, sinking into the opaque mass and stretching it thin like hot plastic. Even softened, the impact rippled out like a sonic boom. Raven held firm, jaw clenched as she poured more power into it.

The dome buckled inward, folding around the object until it reached the earth. It still packed enough force to shake the field, but not much else. Dust faded up as the barrier dispersed, leaving a shallow crater behind—no deeper than a man’s height.

Raven exhaled.

“Nicely done,” Kara said. “Minimal ground disturbance.”

“Thanks,” she replied, shoulders sagging.

They approached the point of impact.

At its center, surrounded by scorched earth, was the meteor. Roughly the size of their heads, it gleamed like obsidian, with a dark, metallic grey color. Thin heatwaves shimmered around it, while smoke curled from pores dotting its surface.

Then they saw it—a fluid, black and thick like tar, leaking from one of the holes. It oozed out slowly, slithering across the rock like a molten slug as trapped heat bubbled beneath its body. Each pop produced something between a shriek and a hiss, yet it clung fast to the surface, refusing to touch earth.

“Is that—“

“The alien,” Raven finished. She could feel its cry even from a distance. “It’s alive, but barely. The meteor’s heat is boiling it alive."

“Then it’s fortunate we are here to help.”

With clinical haste, Kara inhaled deeply—then let out a burst of icy breath that swept over the crater.

The effects were immediate—glistening rime spread across the meteor’s surface, cooling the rock and smothering the heat trapped inside. The ooze’s body slowly relaxed as it became stable.

She looked back at Raven.

“How’s that?”

Raven held out a hand, channeling her focus into reading the creature’s thoughts.

“It’s faint…but stable.”

Kara’s lip twitched, betraying the barest hint of a smile.

“Is it safe to approach?”

“Hard to say,” Raven said, shrugging. “Its thoughts are hazy, almost like it’s asleep.”

“Not surprising.” The Kryptonian nodded. “Being cooled so quickly may have placed it in a dormant state.”

The ooze shuddered.

Both heroines took a step back.

It stirred again, gradually crawling to the top of the meteor. From there it coiled like a serpent, trailing long tendrils that stretched through the air, probing the air around it.

Kara gasped. “Do you think it hears us?”

Raven watched as one of the feelers twisted toward her, cocking like a curious head. Her eyes widened.

“I think it feels us.”

It rose several feet off the meteor, a floating stick of black limbs that grasped at the air like searching hands. Raven held her distance, but extended her senses again. Its mind was still too unstable to read clearly, but a few signals broke through: exhaustion, pain, and…

Curiosity.

“We’ll need to transport it,” she said. “It won’t survive long out here.” “Can your powers contain it?“ Kara asked. “If not, I’ll have to freeze it. There’s no telling whether the creature is harmful to us.” Raven reached forward with one hand, a penumbra of dark energy coalescing around her body. Cautiously she stepped inside the crater, palms held out at the creature. The exo-skin extended past her, inching forward until the two dark bodies were almost touching.

“Can you hear me?” she asked calmly. “We’re here to help.” The ooze leaned forward slightly, grazing her aura. Then—

It spasmed.

Its body flared outward in jagged bursts, tendrils snapping with feral intensity as it let out a low hiss. Before Raven could even flinch, Kara was beside her, one arm up as she pulled the Titan back. “It’s reacting—get back!”

“No,” Raven said quickly, her eyes darting. “It’s just afraid.”

She could feel it now—raw instinct, twitching like a nerve. Fear was the wrong word—more like a survival reflex baked into its biology. It didn’t know where it was, or what they were. Kara held her stance, but she didn’t advance, either. “Then we need to calm it quickly—before fear turns into violence.”

Raven nodded, already lifting her hands again. A ripple of shadow spread out from her palms, surrounding the parasite and the meteor in a halo of dull gray. She focused all her energy into a single emotion, concentrating her influence around it—safety.

“Easy,” she whispered. “We’re not your enemies.”

Cautiously, slowly, the creature began to calm.

Raven’s shoulders relaxed.

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u/MC_Minnow Aug 07 '25 edited Aug 09 '25

As Raven continued soothing the creature, Kara realized the clear skies had turned grey suddenly, rainclouds converging from seemingly nowhere. She glanced up as a light drizzle fell upon them, raising an eyebrow.

Then she saw him.

“We’ve got company—up ahead!”

Raven turned to see a man approaching. He walked with a slow, measured stride—like he’d just happened to wander in and didn’t see them.

His attire looked like it had been pulled from a burial ground—dirty, ragged, and strangely exotic. A canvas cloak hung off his shoulders, faded glyphs scrawled across one of its shoulders. The hood was thrown back, revealing two masks: one, a layer of black cloth covering everything but his eyes; the other a grinning skull molded from dark gold, strapped tight across his mouth.

Beneath the cloak was a lean frame of ashen skin—not unlike Raven’s, but dry and coarse like sandpaper. Cargo pants long past retirement clung to his waist, held up by a studded belt lined with pouches.

But it was his eyes that stopped Raven cold. Even from a distance, she could sense that something strange lived behind them. Something…inhuman. Something starved.

Then he spoke. “Now this,” he said, his drawl unsettlingly smooth, “is exactly what I’ve been looking for.” Kara hovered off the ground, positioning herself between the meteor and the stranger. “State your name and business.” Raven didn’t wait for an answer. Her aura curled behind her shoulders, flaring into jagged wings that spread wide above her. The man grinned. “The name’s Higgs,” he said slowly, like he was winding up a pitch. “I am the particle of God that permeates all existence. The divine constant between atoms. The hinge upon which all cause and effect pivots. I am the golden thread in the weave, the unseen gravity that holds our universe together. As for my business…today, I’m the harbinger of this world’s Supreme Extinction.”

He spread his arms wide, as if awaiting their applause. Raven simply glared. “You’re delusional.” “No, no, no.” He shook a finger at her, his voice thick with reproval. “I’m Higgs. The particle. Of God. Write it down if you need to.”

Kara stepped forward, voice steady.

“Whoever you are, you’re disrupting a sensitive operation. Turn around and leave. Now.”

Higgs’ tone didn’t waver, but he breathed something between a laugh and a sigh.

“I say it twice and still—‘Who are you?’ I wonder if Ra had to deal with this shit.” He shook his head ruefully. “Maybe a demonstration will help you to remember.”

He took a step toward Supergirl. Her fists balled to meet him. Then—

He was suddenly in front of Raven—a flash of gold and an implosion of air left in his wake.

Raven gasped. She staggered back as he grabbed her by the cloak—the meteor just inches behind her heel.

“And here I thought I’d be the only one dressed for the occasion.” His voice dripped beside her ear. “What’s your name, little shadow?”

“Back off!” she hissed, swooping her aura down between them like a barrier. The shadow collided with him, thrusting him back.

Higgs stumbled—then he was suddenly airborne. Kara held him by the cloak, hoisted him overhead, and hurled him up and out of the crater.

She turned back to Raven, eyeing the tremble in her aura. “Are you okay?”

Raven gave a short nod, still catching her breath. “Yeah. He just…caught me off guard.”

“Protect the alien,” she said, turning back to the fight. “I’ll handle this ‘particle of God.’”

Higgs had already recovered, sauntering back over the crater’s edge.

“Alright,” he chuckled. “That one’s on me. Forgot the locals here pack a little more umph than back home. Duly noted.”

Rain poured heavily now, turning scorched earth into mud and flooding the field. Raven’s aura kept her dry, but she noticed the ooze had retreated into the meteor.

Kara wiped a matted strand of hair from her face, squaring off against the stranger.

“Whatever brought you here,” she growled, her voice sharp, “it was a mistake.”

“Careful now, Sunshine,” Higgs replied, wagging a finger. “Don’t write checks your fists can’t cash.”

Kara didn’t hesitate. With a sonic crack, she was airborne, rocketing forward in a charge that sent shockwaves through the mud. She threw an earth-shattering punch toward Higgs’ chest, the air splitting around her—then she froze, mere inches from her target.

Raven gasped as sludge-like strands blossomed from the mud, grappling the Kryptonian. They ensnared her wrists, arms, neck, and legs, with one central cord coiling around her core.

“What the—!”

The strands tightened, molding around every inch of Kara’s body as they slowly dragged her into the pit. She drew her knees in instinctively, trying to push herself up—only to find the earth itself had gone rogue, pulling her into its abyss.

Raven watched the entire crater morph into a swamp of black sinew, ichor-like veins sprouting across its surface. She bolted skyward, slapping away oily tendrils with arcs of astral force as she levitated the meteor beside her.

“Should’ve listened,” Higgs said, watching Kara writhe on the ground as her face twisted in pain and anger. The mire pooled around his boots, supporting him as he stepped closer. “Now y’all gotta learn the hard way.”

He grabbed her by the chin with one hand, forcing her to meet his gaze as his other hand reached up to remove his mask.

Then, with a baleful glint in his eye, he slammed the cursed metal over her mouth.

A muffled scream rang across the valley as the mask bore into her, sparks crackling from inside the metal. Her body arched, muscles seizing—even her binds trembled as they struggled to hold her in place.

Higgs took a knee in front of her.

“I tried to be civil,” he whispered, clicking his tongue. “Gave you a chance to walk. But you just had to be the hero.” He caressed her cheek with one hand, unscathed by the energy nipping at his fingers. “Where’d that get you, huh?”

"Azarath, Metrion, Zinthos!"

A pillar of earth crashed down on him with vengeful force. Sheathed in darkness, it shattered over his body and submerged him—just briefly—into the vat below. He resurfaced a second later, but that was all the time Raven needed.

She descended like a shadow given form—eyes blazing white, fists orbited by spheres of crackling ultrablack.

Leave her alone!

Higgs moved to counter, but she came wild and fast, an uppercut to the chin snapping his head back. A second blow struck center mass, detonating with a surge of infernal force that launched him from the pit, tumbling across the field like a ragdoll.

Raven spun on Kara, who was up to her chin in ooze. She extended both arms.

"Azarath, Metrion, Zinthos!"

Power pulsed through her like hellfire—too much, too fast—until her veins glowed black beneath her skin. The tar resisted, tightening its grip—but she pushed back harder, her aura blazing as the pool screamed and parted beneath her.

Kara began to rise.

First her shoulders broke the surface. Then her elbows. Then—

She moved.

Kara dug deep, wrenching her arms upward and locking her hands around the mask. Arcane sparks burned against her knuckles, but she ignored them. She pulled, teeth bared, fighting through the agony until the cursed metal finally tore free. With an agonized cry, she smashed it between her fists—golden shards bursting between her fingers.

Raven clenched her teeth. She could feel her control slipping, red flames flickering behind the white of her eyes. Waves of magic roared inside her like an ocean, begging to spill past the boundaries she had trained so hard to maintain… but Kara was almost free.

She couldn’t stop now.

More tendrils reached out, climbing Kara’s body like vines. Raven severed them with arcs of bladed energy, each strike echoing like thunder.

“You should’ve left,” Kara grunted, torn between the two forces pulling at her.

Raven shook her head, voice low and strained.

“We came here together, we leave together.”

Kara managed a grin through the pain.

She inhaled slowly, filling her lungs to the point of straining her already fractured ribs.

Then she exhaled hard.

The air shrieked around her.

Wind exploded from her lungs, a violent burst of propulsion that sent her flying in a blur of motion.

Raven’s tether held fast, redirecting the momentum and guiding her back down like a sling. Kara crashed onto solid ground just outside the pit, skidding to a stop beside the meteor.

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u/MC_Minnow Aug 07 '25 edited Aug 09 '25

Raven checked on her teammate—she didn’t rise, but she was still breathing.

Then she noticed Kara’s hair, now hanging long down her back—far longer than when they’d arrived.

“Congratulations,” Higgs said, clapping as he strolled back toward the pit. “I wasn’t sure you had it in you, but you actually pulled her free! Not bad!”

“What did you do to her?” Raven shouted.

“What, you mean the aging?” Higgs stopped at the pit’s edge. “That’s a little something called Timefall—rain that speeds up the aging process. Probably not something your world’s seen before, but you’ll get real familiar with it soon. You’re lucky you saved her when you did. A few more minutes, and I reckon she’d have hit retirement.”

Raven looked up at the sky—stormclouds covered only their secluded patch of land. Then she looked down. Her hair and nails were growing longer by the second.

He was right.

Darkness surged inside her again, this time erupting as a dome to shield her from the downpour. Her eyes were white flames beneath her hood, burning with judgment.

Why are you doing this?”

“Now that is the million-dollar question.” Higgs held his arms up in congratulations. “And it only took you how long to ask?”

“Then answer me!” Raven snapped. “What do you want with us?”

“Who said I wanted you?” He shrugged. “You two just beat me to the punch.”

Raven hesitated. Then it clicked.

“In my defense, I did come all the way from Cali,” Higgs went on, crossing the tar pit. “But hey, what matters is I’m here now.” He pointed at the meteor. “And that little guy is coming home with me.”

Raven dropped in front of him, her aura sweeping back the ooze beneath her.

“What do you want with it?”

“Remember that ‘harbinger of the world’s destruction’ bit I mentioned earlier?” His eyes gleamed. “Well, that baby’s the catalyst. Ground zero for everything we’ve got planned.”

A chill crept through Raven’s body. The words resonated inside her, hitting far closer to home than she’d expected—he’d might as well have been describing her. A part of her recoiled, while another recognized the severity of such a threat.

Then she realized the other part of his claim.

We?” she echoed. “There are others like you?”

“Sweetheart, there’s no one in existence quite like me,” Higgs chuckled. “But I do serve someone higher—my Leader Supreme. The God who permeates all existence, of whom I am a particle.” He put a hand to his chin thoughtfully. “I swear I mentioned this.”

“Well, you can tell your supreme leader that the Earth isn’t yours to destroy,” Raven replied fervidly. “So beat it!”

Higgs shook his head.

“I admire the spunk, kid—but somethin’ tells me your partner might not be up to go another round. Ain’t that right, Sunshine?”

Raven turned to Kara, who was just now beginning to stir. The Kryptonian pushed herself to her knees, looking up at them. Her face was hardened, but exhausted.

Raven turned back to Higgs.

“You’ll have to get through me first.”

“You sure about that?”

He vanished in a flash of gold, reappearing between Kara and the meteor.

Kara struggled to stand, but a kick to the stomach sent her rolling toward the pit’s edge.

Higgs turned back to the meteor.

“Now, how ‘bout we see what’s inside—“

Raven lunged at him. With a sweep of her arms she threw him back toward the sky, crushing him against a torrent of dark energy from both hands. Higgs tumbled through the air briefly before he vanished again, reappearing with a thud on the field.

Raven knelt beside Kara, pulling her away from the pit behind them.

“We have to run.” She held a hand out at the meteor, drawing it to her with a gesture.

“No,” Kara pled, eyes drained but defiant. “This is my responsibility. If I don’t stop him, there’s no telling what destruction he’ll cause!”

“If he gets the alien, then the whole planet’s dead!”

The Kryptonian shook her head sternly, her expression firm. Raven held back a sigh.

“Fine, I’ll fight him. You get the meteor out of here and send for backup.”

Kara shook her head once more.

“I cannot allow you to carry that burden yourself. This is my mission, my duty! Once I’m on my feet again I can—“

“You’re too hurt to fight!” Raven finally snapped. “One of us needs to get the alien away from here, and I’m our best chance against him!”

Kara’s jaw clenched tight. She scowled at Raven, she couldn’t argue.

“I’ll open a portal to get you both out,” Raven muttered, already ashamed of her remark. “Find someplace safe to take the alien, then send for help.”

“…Understood.”

Higgs was in front of them again. Behind her, Raven could hear tentacles slithering closer.

She used one hand to summon a barrier. The other opened a portal.

“Go, now!”

“Sorry, little shadow.” Higgs shook his head. “But that ain’t gonna fly. I waited too long for my retribution. I’m not losing it now.”

Another gold mask glinted in his hand, just like the first. He knelt down and drove the unholy artefact into the earth, sparks flying as tar erupted like oil from beneath it.

The pool behind them tossed and rose, black cords converging and intertwining to create something larger—much larger. They shaped and hardened, rising as high as trees before completing their transformation into seven gnarled fingers. Their roots converged into a massive palm before it tore itself free from the cesspool—a jagged, screaming maw split across its wrist.

Raven and Kara stared in horror at the hellish mutation.

“Kheir,” Higgs commanded, gesturing to the meteor. “Be a pal and fetch that shiny rock for me. Feel free to eat the humans when you’re done.”

The monstrous limb responded without hesitation, lurching forward to seize the two in its grasp.

Raven held her arms wide, conjuring a full sphere of shadow around them. It bought only seconds’ reprieve, cracking at once under the monster’s grip. Her muscles trembled as she pumped power through every vein, pushing herself beyond the point of exhaustion just to hold it—but it still wasn’t enough. Between the portal, the barrier, and all of today’s trials, she simply didn’t have anything left to give.

She watched as the leviathan’s mouth lunged at her, a vortex of black fangs gnashing against the barrier.

“Go, now!” she cried, daring a glance over her shoulder—

Kara was gone. The portal hung open behind Raven, revealing a gateway back to Titans Tower. But Kara and the meteor were nowhere inside it.

“I’m sorry.”

She turned—just in time to see the meteor thrust into her.

Raven hunched over, losing her already strained grip on her magic. The portal began to unravel, her barrier dissolved into the aether, and the monster snapped its claw around them.

Just before she was crushed, Raven was shoved backward by Kara’s super-strength. She flew through the portal, skidding across the floor of Titans Tower. The meteor bounced down the hall beside her, and she heard a crack.

Raven sat up to see Kara, back turned, facing the beast alone.

"Wait!” she called.

But the portal snapped shut. The last thing Raven saw was liquid death swallowing her friend whole.

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u/MC_Minnow Aug 07 '25 edited Aug 09 '25

Raven sat on the floor, heart thrashing at her ribs. Her eyes were locked on the spot where the portal had closed—where Kara had vanished. Her chest ached, heavy with something dangerously close to anger.

Kara was gone—consumed in the crushing claw of a beast.

That idiot.

Raven said she would fight the monster. Kara had said she understood, that she would take the alien.

She’d lied. She forced Raven to flee—forced her to abandon an ally, to carry the burden of survival—while she risked her life protecting the Earth.

And Raven could do nothing about it. She couldn’t swap places, couldn’t leave the alien by itself, couldn’t bring it with her.

If her teammates were here, they could stay here so Raven could go back to help. But Raven was alone. Isolated—just like she wanted.

That meant leaving Kara to fend for herself. A respected ally—a friend, left to fight a cultist and his monster, weakened and alone.

It was enough to make a person scream—but she couldn’t even do that.

She couldn’t let it out. Not the grief. Not the guilt. Not the fury curling like smoke in her lungs. It pressed inside her, clawing to break free—but she held it in. She had to lock it up, pretend like it wasn’t there. She had to control herself.

She loathed herself for that.

Something stirred beside her.

She turned her attention to the cracked shell of the meteor. The alien inside hadn’t moved since the fight began. There was no telling how critical its condition had become.

This cursed, innocent creature.

“If I can’t save my friend…the least I can do is make sure you survive.”

With bitter resolve, she crawled closer, raising a hand toward it. Her voice softened.

“You can come out. You’re safe now.”

For a moment, she heard nothing.

Then—movement.

The shell split wider. The creature emerged—black, sinewy, and pulsing with life.

“It’s okay,” Raven said soothingly. “I won’t hurt you. No one will.”

The ooze tilted its feeler at her again.

She smiled.

Then it lunged.

It struck with terrifying speed—black sinew crashing into her, tendrils snapping around her limbs. Raven tried to fight back, clawing at it with raw magic. But she was exhausted, and it was relentless. Soon it had dragged her to the floor, pulling itself closer.

It stretched and spread across her, cold and alive. She screamed, thrashed, tried to shake it off—but it had already started to sink in. Through her skin. Into her blood, like toxic ichor.

Then it went even deeper. It dug into her mind, threading through her very thoughts—someplace no one was meant to go. It scraped at walls she’d spent a lifetime building, probing places that were never meant to be seen. Not by her enemies. Not even by her friends.

She fought back harder—her willpower crashing like a stormfront, everything she had left thrown into resisting. Mental defenses forged through a lifetime of pain and practice slammed shut like iron gates. Her thoughts, her fears—she wouldn’t let it inside. She couldn’t.

The world blurred as her consciousness slipped and faded. Her power was spent, body shaking on fumes.

But she didn’t stop.

She clenched her mind like a fist and held the thing back, just barely.

Then it spoke. Deep. Elated. Curious.

She gasped.

What… are you?

It answered.

We.

Are.

Venom.


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u/MC_Minnow Aug 07 '25

Apocalypse Now

Episode 0: Attack on Titan

Featuring…

Raven: The hero. Child of Trigon. Avatar of the Apocalypse.

Higgs: The stranger. Particle of God. Harbinger of the Supreme Extinction.

Venom: The alien. Catalyst to the world’s destruction. Motives unknown.

Kara Zor-El: The traitor. Last daughter of Krypton. A kindred spirit.

Alignment: Renegade.